My personal voice

18/03/2016

On Saint Patrick’s feast day, St Pius celebrated the feast of Saint Patrick.

In the morning, we all gathered and began to walk to the church. I felt like vomiting. and felt hot and really nervous.

I didn’t feel like being Invited.

I had BUTTERFLIES in my stomach.

After that mass Room 5 and Room 3 had a shared lunch at the field underneath the tree.

I brought nothing but my soul friend brought something and my other friends also shared with me.

I was shy to admit that I had no food to bring.

I thought the readers were amazing, because I loved their expressions. After the mass Room 5 and Room 3 had a shared lunch on the field and also took photos. I had a lovely time.

This is me and my soul friend.

             

WALT: write using a recount with our personal voice. I used my personal voice in my writing when I described

That the readers were great and that they had readen amazing