I really liked your reasons for owning a dog, I thought they were very relevant to the topic. I would also like to own a dog because of their cleverness. I think you should work on your conclusion because it's like the same as your introduction. Other than that, you did a good job!
Hi Telesia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your reasons for owning a dog, I thought they were very relevant to the topic. I would also like to own a dog because of their cleverness. I think you should work on your conclusion because it's like the same as your introduction. Other than that, you did a good job!
Great Work!
Aaliyah