My sisters and I had a rap battle last night. We do this quite often. This rap is about how I feel.
I need to lose weight,
I can't fake.
stitches slow me down
as I feel my heart pound.
Imagining trees, yelling and cheering,
just as I start tearing.
Being fat can be serious,
it can also be curious.
I don't want to be mocked,
it makes me feel knocked.
I can't take junk,
it is like a punk.
I don't wanna die,
so no more pie!
I need to say BYE to FAT,
Just one more snack?
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DeleteWow Sia,
ReplyDeleteThis is so amazing. Your so good in rap battle, I am pretty sure you won.
Hi Telesia, I like how you were ryhming and made this poem about your feelings. I could connect with your rap because I have felt the same way sometimes. I think you need to work on the words when actually rapping it.
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